A New Take On My Favorite Story

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Last month I looked back on my favorite story that I’ve written on this blog. It was a story about AALFO a computer that is being trained to predict the future and it operator Henry. I submitted it to a writing workshop for feedback and with some adjustments I feel like I improved the story dramatically. If you read the original this is different enough that I think you’ll enjoy it. If you didn’t read the original then you’ll get to enjoy reading this version for the first time.

I’ve also compiled it into a PDF so you can download it and read it on your computer or phone.

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I hope you enjoy. If you have any feedback I’m always open to it. And as always thanks for reading.

Find Peace in Progress,
Nicholas Licalsi

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